Thread: Sentence Corrections Needed
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Old 28-Jun-2006, 14:40
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Post Re: Sentence Corrections Needed
How about these corrections?

Locked away in a case, I was surprised to find my key.
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- Searching in a locked case, I find my key surprisingly.
- Locking away in a case, I was surprised to find my key. (I think it's wrong)
- I was surprised to find my key which is locked away in a case.
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