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Old 29-Jun-2006, 04:35
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Default Re: grammar check for my essay and editing

developing diagnoses- you don't develop a diagnosis
lets- let's
Through out- Throughout
I my heart became discouraged- you can't have two subjects like this
in all my heart- in my heart
so excited to become- at becoming
in or out going activity- unclear
I was going to be fine don’t worry- fine and not to worry
I give birth- gave
labor- labors
Many mother- mothers
lot’s- lots
hold gently- hold him
after I give- gave
it not always easy- it is not
has been filled- have
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