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Old 30-Jun-2006, 06:11
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Default Re: Would you mind correcting this sentence, please?
Pay the price = be punished for what you've done, so i wouldn't use it. There's no need for 'as well' if you keep same, shich works better because of the possibility of confusing 'pay the price'.
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