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My Favorite Place

My favorite place at home is the small porch in the back of my house. It is only 3 by 12 feet, but big enough to hold family and friends in unending and delicious evenings of chat. A big white garden chair in the corner makes the place smaller; however, it is the corner where I find myself. The magical corner surrenders me with a fresh breeze, multiples songs of birds, strong scents of Marigold and the crimson flowers.
A small coffee table in the center holds my water paintings, newspaper, phone and dreams in a necessary mess. An old wood cage that was home for my bird is hanging from the roof, in the opposite corner. A candle in the nook lights the darkest nights.
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