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Old 15-Nov-2003, 00:14
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"Two women from different background, different accomplishments, but yet also similar in many ways. "

This is actually not a complete sentence because it lacks a main verb. How about:
Two women from different backgrounds, with different accomplishments, yet they were similar in many ways.
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