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Old 15-Nov-2003, 00:28
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"Two well-known women who believed in giving love, who thought in kindness of people, who believed in what they stood for. "

Again, this isn't a complete sentence.

These two well-known women believed in giving love, who thought kindly of people, and believed in what they stood for.
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