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Old 18-Sep-2006, 05:57
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Default Re: Need editing for one paragraph

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Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
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the children acted like they were bewitched so the judge would believe them if they accused someone of being a witched

It would be better if you posted the entire thing on the forum. As it is, individual sections cannot be copied.
Thanks for your advice........and that is the entire thing..our teacher only asked us to write 8 to 12 sentences.............

Last edited by startanewlife; 23-Sep-2006 at 04:51.
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