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Originally Posted by englishstudent  One day, when they lost their way, the boy felt so tired
and terrified that he could not move anymore with his weak legs.
...and buried one under the ground, and gave the boy
the other four and said, "Son, you must realize that we
all have five coins - childhood, teenage, youth, middle age,
and old age. You have now spent one (that is) under
the ground. You cannot spend them all on the grassland
without any (more) significance. You should leave here and
see more of the world."
... and became a great captain. |
Hi,englishstudent, thanks for your help both in this essay and in the previous one.
after your modification, the essay become more vivid and flowing.
Thanks