You need to work on your choice of words. What you have so far is rather confusing.
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Originally Posted by danielkramer  With the present, I am pleased to formally present our company |
I don't understand "with the present" there.
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Originally Posted by danielkramer It is our intention, that starting from the readings of this work you will be able to observe the varied services that our company offers concerning private security, from physical security, up to the use of the most modern electronic technology that situates us within the market as one of the companies with the greatest future projections. |
I suggest replacing
varied services with
various services.
You need to simplify that and make it more understandable.
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Originally Posted by danielkramer We will help you to develop an effective security policy |
That is fairly clear. That is the kind of English you want to use throughout. (Better: "We will help you develop an effective security policy.)
Simplify!
~R