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Old 23-Sep-2006, 07:32
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Default Re: Can you Correct My Essay Please
on April 2002- in
as how I’m- as to/about how I was
and hoping- delete 'and'
And I performed well- ditto
MOST HAPPIEST DAY- delete 'most'
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