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Old 05-Oct-2006, 16:47
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Default Help revise my sentence, Please

Can someone please help me revise my sentence.

Meanwhile, Immigrants who were learning how to speak fluent in English set a disadvantage for students who only speaks Enlgish. Since the imimigrants were learning to speak fluent in English; the immigrants are able to go out and find a job as a result, fewer jobs for those who only speak English becuase the company's who hired the employee's are more interested with the person whos bilingual

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