08-Oct-2006, 00:38
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 Re: whic one is the best way to express.
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Originally Posted by drhy  "They reported significantly inreased 1-year mortlaity in patients with periprocedural CK-MB elevation eventhough who had successful angiographic result"
"they reported a significantly increased 1-year mortality in patients with periprocedural CK-MB elevation despite angiographic success."
is there any differences in terms of meaning, which one would you preffer if you were instead of me.
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| Neither of them are correct: "They reported significantly inreased 1-year mortlaity in patients with periprocedural CK-MB elevation, even those who had a successful angiographic result."
"They reported a significantly increased 1-year mortality in patients with periprocedural CK-MB elevation, despite angiographic success."
I have corrected the grammar in both. I would choose the first one because the second seems to focus on the success of the procedure rather than the result.
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