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Default Re: Carrying a heavy pile of books, his foot caught on a step.

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Originally Posted by Lenka View Post
Carrying a heavy pile of books, his foot caught on a step.

I read this sentence on the internet (on a website dealing with verbals :)) and just this sentence was marked with an asterisk.
(There was an axplanation, that sentences marked with asterisk are either ambiguous or peculiar.)

I just wonder whether this senetence (it sounds quite weird to me, but I am not a native speaker...) is ambiguous (has to meanings) or is considered peculiar, nonstandard.
This is what is called a dangling participle or a misplaced modifier.

As the sentence is written, his foot is carrying the books. This can be easily repaired:

While he was carrying a heavy pile of books, his foot caught on a step.
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