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Old 14-Oct-2006, 17:07
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Default Re: Is this sentence correct? Thanks in advance

What's wrong is that it doesn't make sense. You can have all of your nouns, verbs, etc. in the right places, but they have to convey a meaning.

You can say, "The cow is in the barn chewing hay."

How can a bridge be in the sun?
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