Thread: Can any native in English correct it, please?
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Old 21-Oct-2006, 22:54
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Default Re: Can any native in English correct it, please?
"The young" is OK.

Personally I would use "The increase in the rate of violence ..."
but let us wait for the experts to hear their opinion.
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