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Originally Posted by abrilsp Kevin, today is a very important day for you. I understand that you are a bit worried about going to school today. |
That is good, but you will need to simplify the next sentence.
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Originally Posted by abrilsp I know how you feel; it is the very first day of you going to a place where you do not know what to expect. |
You need to simplify that. Try:
- I know how you feel. You have never been to school before, and you don't know what to expect.
More later.
:)