Thread: What are loose sentences? Periodic sentences?
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Old 30-Nov-2003, 22:03
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Originally Posted by tdol
Loose sentence:

She agreed to marry him, live with him and go through all that life threw at them at his side. ;-0
You might want to rewrite that. It's a little confusing, especially the ending.

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