[RonBee]

Originally Posted by sam_ccld

HI
iI came up with a couple of paragraphs can anyone tell me if i am in the right path thanks. I am a bit worried that i am repeating myself.

I came up with a couple of paragraphs. can anyone tell me if I am on the right path? Thanks. I am a bit worried that I am repeating myself.

One thing for you to keep in mind is that those in the position to make decisions about promotions are more than anything else interested in what you can do for the company.

Originally Posted by sam_ccld

My motivations:

To further my career aspirations of becoming part of a management team, I want to obtain a formal qualification in front line Management. I have the drive, determination and energy to succeed I am willing to commit to the time and dedication needed to complete the course.
I believe that a manager must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation of how manage and lead a team through challenging times.

To further my goal of becoming a part of management, I want to obtain the academic qualifications needed to become part of the management team. I have the drive, determination and energy to succeed. I am willing to commit the time and energy needed to successfully complete the course. I believe that a manager must have a solid understanding of how to manage and lead a team through challenging times.

Originally Posted by sam_ccld

Benefits to my self and the company:

As a result, my communication and team building skills will be enhanced. It will improve my career prospects within (company) and the opportunity to diversify within the company. Having this knowledge will allow me to better participate in achieving (company) targets. I will obtain great personal satisfaction by achieving one of my goals becoming a manager

As a result of taking the course, my communications skills and team-building skills will be enhanced. I will be a more valuable member of the team. Having the knowledge gained will help me to do a better job of helping the company achieve its goals.

Make the focus what you can and will do for the company--not you personally. Understandably, you are interested in your job satisfaction. However, the company is not particulary interested in that. Instead, they are more interested in what you can do for them. Make that your focus.

~R