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Old 05-Nov-2006, 14:44
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Default Re: Shall you correct those phrases, please?

Hi Falcon,

First of all, the title of your topic sounds more natural if you use "will" or "would" (even better) instead of "shall".

Will/Would you correct those phrases, please?

1)I'm interested to know more about this fantastic place.

2)My country doesn't have any influential role in the world.

3)I'm keen on knowing more about you, your country and your city.
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