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 Re: My Personal Statement
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Originally Posted by Sammy P  Hello! I am currently writing my personal statement for university, although I think that it still needs some work done to it. As I am going to be studying English Language at university, I figure that it's best to get the grammar and overall statement spot on. I figure that there's no better place to get advice and ideas from than here. | Hello! I am currently writing my personal statement for university, and it still needs some work. As I am going to be studying English at university, I figure that it's best to get the grammar and overall statement spot on. I figure that there's no better place to get advice and ideas than here. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy P At 6th form I studied Media Studies, History and Philosophy and Ethics. | At 6th form I took Media Studies, History, and Philosophy and Ethics. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy P I achieved B grades in all three of my subjects at A-Level. This is due to my ability to meet deadlines and work in groups when it is necessary. | I achieved B grades in all three of my subjects at A-Level. That was due to my ability to meet deadlines and my ability to work as a member of a group. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy P Throughout the two years that I studied these subjects, I have become increasingly interested in the English language. My goal at university is to be able to expand my ability and understanding of English by majoring in English Language. As I may choose a career in the media, it would really benefit me to learn about the various ways English can be used day to day, and in a variety of social contexts. This also interests me greatly. | Throughout the two years these subjects, I became increasingly interested in learning about the English language. My goal at university is to increase my understanding of English and to increase my ability to use English in a variety of contexts. As I may choose a career in the media, it would really benefit me to learn about the various ways English is used on a daily basis in a variety of social contexts. Say: ...working at a leisure park. ~R  |