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Re: How do i fix these sentences?? Quote:
Originally Posted by joanna49 Dear teachers and members,
Are these sentences correct? I think I make some mistakes(in grammar or structure) in these sentences. Could you suggest me ways to fix them?
-Most of my friends looked at me with surprise. -That was exactly the same as my expectation. -Most people felt surprised. -It is becoming more and more popular. -Boys generally were playing better so they laughed at us sometimes, but we didn’t care about that very much. -Soccer games need much running, physical strength and power.
| Try: I think I made some mistakes in these sentences. Could you suggest some ways to fix them? Possibly: Playing soccer involves much running, thus it requires much stamina.  |