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Post Re: How do i fix these sentences??

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Originally Posted by joanna49 View Post
Dear teachers and members,
Are these sentences correct? I think I make some mistakes(in grammar or structure) in these sentences. Could you suggest me ways to fix them?

-Most of my friends looked at me with surprise.
-That was exactly the same as my expectation.
-Most people felt surprised.
-It is becoming more and more popular.
-Boys generally were playing better so they laughed at us sometimes, but we didn’t care about that very much.
-Soccer games need much running, physical strength and power.
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I think I made some mistakes in these sentences. Could you suggest some ways to fix them?
Possibly:
Playing soccer involves much running, thus it requires much stamina.

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