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Originally Posted by RonBee  ... Please use the shower while sitting, and turn it off when you are finished.
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I agree with this improvement, but I'd also associate the 'Please' with the desired behaviour:
Please sit while using use the shower, and turn it off when you are finished.
This collocates both
please and
sit, and
shower and
turn it off, making the whole easier to parse.
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