[Ju]

a) I didn't believe that anyone could choose Mary over Linda -
serene, exquisite Linda.

• This is an excerpt from a story about "matchmaker". What does it mean of choose Mary over Linda?

b) He's been alienating his family and engaging in illegal acts to
finance his gambling.

• Is it a good English writing?
• Can I say alienating his friends / his studies / his wife / his work?

c) 1) He's a adventurous man whom enjoys risk-taking.
2) Risk-taking is his hobby.

• Are they good English writing?
• What are the differences between risk taking and risk-taking?

d) Is being withdrawn a kind of charactor flaw?

• Is it a good English writing?

e)

1. Is it a good English writing?
2. Is it a piece of good English writing?
3. Is it good English writing?
4. Is it good English?

• Could you correct for me ?

Thanks