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Re: Plz check my essay and correct my mistakes Quote:
Originally Posted by lapujhanna The following appeared in a memo from the marketing director of Bargain Brand Cereals. "One year ago we introduced our first product, 'Bargain Brand' breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies. Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices, and although several plan to introduce their own budget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit. Given our success selling cereal, Bargain Brand should now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible." | Rather than as quickly as possible say as soon as possible. Quote:
Originally Posted by lapujhanna The argument discussed above by the marketing director of Bargain Brand cereals proves her good thinking. She draws conclusion based on the success of her first product and thinks that it may be a good choice to start a new range of different low priced food products. At this time the companies first product is a hit and it drew many customers from the top selling company’s which proves that the product is cheap and best. People have good impression of the company at this time and it may be useful in expanding the business for other products as well | The argument discussed above by the marketing director of Bargain Brand cereals proves her good thinking. She draws conclusions based on the success of her first product and thinks that it may be a good idea to start a new line of low priced food products. At that time the company's first product is a hit and it had drawn many customers from the top selling companies. The company has developed a good reputation, and that reputation should help the company to develop new lines. ~R |