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Old 04-Dec-2006, 12:27
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Default Re: Hello. Need your help

I feel that I'm very confused to write a complex sentence. Thank you for your help. Please help me correct this cover letter

Dear Ms Phuong Thao,


Safety Engineer

I have read your recruitment advertisement on the website kiemviec.com. I’m very interested in working at this position.

You will see from the enclosed resume that I have just graduated university in 2005. I had no many experiences but I suppose that it is not too important. I will learn and work as hard as possible if I am recruited to work in your company .

I can be easy to demonstrate it to you. I spent 2 months to practise in Engineering Staff of Colgate-Palmolive company. That was not too long time but it was quite enough for the manager to assess my ability very well and one thing I also use to demonstrate to you is my thesis to be assessed 9/10.

If you feel that my qualifications are suitable, I can be available for interview at short notice. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
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