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Originally Posted by sweetheart  I feel that I'm very confused to write a complex sentence. Thank you for your help. Please help me correct this cover letter
Dear Ms Phuong Thao,
Re: Safety Engineer
I read with interest your advertisement for the above post on the kiemviec.com. website and would be grateful if you could consider me for this post.
Please find enclosed my resume and other information in support of my application. I realize that I do not have a great deal of experience but can assure you that I am conscientious and willing to learn, and given the opportunity I will make every effort to be an asset to your company.
During my two months practice placement with the Engineering Staff of Colgate-Palmolive company I was able to demonstrate to the manager my capabilities. I also gained a 90% mark for my thesis.
I can attend an interview at any time that suits you.
Thank you for your attention.
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