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Originally Posted by joanna49  Thank Casiopea for giving me the websites. I think making a thesis is really difficult...it can't be too board or too specific. I wrote another thesis statement:Variety of shifts especially language shift across generations have reflected the way immigrants adapt to the English culture.
Can you tell me what you think about it??Is it strong enough?...in my essay can I desribe about different generations and their language use...and show there is a language shift across generations? |
Joanna, I like your thesis statement. Try something shorter,
Language shifts across generations reflect the way immigrants have adapted to English culture.
I agree with Anglika. Write about something you know.
