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Old 29-Dec-2006, 14:17
Jair dos Santos Correa Jair dos Santos Correa is offline
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Default Re: Can somebody check my Motivation letter?

Congratulations Genetic, your letter is great. I'm an intermediate English student, I think you´re in a level more advanced than mine, but every help is worthy, don't you agree with me?
When you wrote :I am eager to show that my intelligence, hard-work, maturity, and enthusiasm will be a positive contribution to your company. I think these adjectives would take all the sentences to the plural, what do you think? In my opinion it should be: I am eager to show that ... enthusiasm would contribute positively to your company.

Happy new year.
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