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Old 11-Jan-2007, 02:47
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Default Re: help me plz, the deadline is coming to town :((

I kept the sorrow for my own,- to myself
grade 9th- 9th grade
This disordered my tranquil family- something like 'this broke up the tranquility of the family'
hardly noisier than a funeral house - as quiet as a house in mourning? or do you mean a 'funeral home'- where they deal with the dead bodies?
my inside self - inner
I faced the difficulty which was not academic- a difficulty
the first time in life, I really cared about my family- for...
After the long day shouldering the family burden- a long day
I backed to my small room- went back
excelled thousands other- beating thousands of other
to the dichotomy life- I'd delete 'life'
“success” mask - mask of success
I completed maturely the leader position - I assumed a leadership role
From this experience, I learn- have learned
not stop to lament - lamenting
give me consciousness to amass thousands of SAT words- how about 'give me the strength'
“ He who is afraid of hurting his own leg dares not to move on, but if so he stops, his legs are worthless”- how about saying where this comes from- is it a Chinese saying?
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