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Topic: Why do people go to college?

People go on studying after high school for many reasons. Some of them attend college to have a degree, others in order to increase their knowledge and few people because they just want to be in touch with others.

Nowadays, the labour market asks for workers with studies and that makes people attend to college. Even though people who finish high school is prepared to do several jobs, many jobs do not hire people who only finish secondary. Most of the employers look for people graduated from university.

Many people go to college as they simply want to know more than they do. They think increasing their knowledge is one of the goals in their lives and make the human being mature. Actually, some people study all their life since they take courses in which they are interested in. Intellectual people believe colleges are the best place to increase their knowledge and be a better person.

Finally, in some countries few people go to college in order to be in touch with other people. Although colleges are not places to make friends, few people go to college to meet others and have fun. They think people with the same interests can be found in college and a friendship can start. Despite the fact that going to university is frowned upon, a small number of people go to college to start friendships.

In summary, people go to college either to increase their knowledge or to be better prepared for jobs. Even, there are several who believe colleges are good places to make friends.


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