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Old 24-Jan-2007, 11:39
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Default Re: Ietls Essay Help Correction

thanks for the correction:

- Nowadays we are constantly under the menace of a new Worl War breaking out, international tensions are at their climax everywhere and no one knows where and when the next battle will be fought. In such a scenario, having the possibility to ease these tensions is vital for a less worrying future. Such a possibility is often provided by sporting occasions, among which the football World Cup, played every four years, is one of the most popular.-

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