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It is okay but there are some grammer errors.
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Ok. Can you please let me know where these are?
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Please do not mention why you left your last job as it sounds quite negative.
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I know. I also noticed it sounds quite 'pretentious', and even more when I say that 'there was no longer scope for me to use all my knowledge and experience'... But I don't want them to think that I was fired from my old job, and that is all I came up with lol. Any ideas?
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you don't have to say how long you been unemployed
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Once again, by saying this I'm just trying to make them think I left because I wanted to.
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please also mention why you think you are the best candidate for this job.
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I've already done that. When I say that I'm good at languages and computers, and have working experience, and can deal with customers in a polite and friendly way and so on, I mean they should hire me.