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 Re: Application letter
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Originally Posted by HyphenSpider  For the last two years I have been working for Blackwell Bookshops as a sales assistant. The time I (have?) spent there (has?) improved my ability to deal withcustomers in a polite and friendly way as well as honing my negotiation skills. I am now seeking to further my experience in sales, and to expand my knowledge. | Almost perfect. Try: For the last two years I have been working for Blackwell Bookshops as a sales assistant. The time I have spent there has improved my ability to deal with customers in a polite and friendly way as well as honing my negotiation skills. I am now seeking to further my experience in sales, and to expand my knowledge in that field.
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