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Old 01-Feb-2007, 03:09
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Okay, how about:
The time I spent there improved both my ability to deal with customers and my negotiating skills.
I don't totally like that sentence. (It's not the time you spent there but what you did with that made you improve yourself.) However, I have restructured it so you don't have to use the same verb twice. (Tdol would do a better job of explaining the whys.)

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