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Old 05-Jan-2004, 04:49
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I am not sure what the answer to your question is, but I think you better take another look at your sentences.

Re:
  • High heels clattering on the pavement, the angry women marched toward the mayor's office.

Try:
  • Her high heels clattering on the pavement, the angry women marched toward the mayor's office.

Re:
  • (With) their high heels clattering on the pavement, the angry woman marched toward the mayor's office.

Try:
  • Their high heels clattering on the pavement, the angry women marched toward the mayor's office.

What do you think?

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