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Re: Please correct my text Quote:
Originally Posted by arabiata Dear experts,
First of all sorry for my poor english.
Please correct the following text:
I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them.[who do you know?]
Two first-hand experiences:
1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food.
2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work.
If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is.
Thanks,
Gabor | English
Israel
Arabs
Jews
Jewish
anti-semitism
who is Jewish
Otherwise, grammatically it looks ok. |