[asad hussain]

Could someone please look at following two texts for any grammar mistakes and weird sentences, and also add something, if they feel any need?


1. This Saturday, we celebrated Sports Day. We teachers made plumes for the children. They waved them in the air, which created an atmosphere of great splendor and a beautiful rainbow of gaiety. We also made the children hand bands. They seemed very happy wearing the colorful bands. They enjoyed themselves very much and had a lot of fun at this gala event.

2. The children enjoyed the activity a lot. They cut different beautiful color papers, and pasted them into a butterfly outline.

Your help is appreciated from the bottom of my heart.