[RonBee]

Originally Posted by smiln32

I would word this as:

I am responsible for direct sales, including profit and loss activities, customer growth, increasing revenue and personnel development. This position has provided me with an outstanding opportunity to continually improve my communication and interpersonal skills.

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I would word as:

Presently, I am working as a Sales Executive at First Cambodia Co., Ltd.


Overall, your letter is pretty good. :)

~Carla

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Excellent!