I am suggesting that your versions are correct, and the bold edited versions are incorrect; they don't make sense to me.
I'm afraid we'll have to wait for a real English teacher to log on before you get a clear grammatical answer to this (I am not a teacher), but I'd be suprised if they disagree.
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