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 Re: Plz comment my essay! interesting topic but hard to write
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Originally Posted by jinnie1704 
Along with the development of society, there has been an increasing rise in the rate of crimes committed by young people. Some people think that it is because the mother works outside the home. Personally, I don’t agree with this idea. | Along with the development of society, there has been an increasing rise in the rate of crimes committed by young people. Some people think that is because the mothers of those young people work outside the home. I don't agree with that idea.
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Originally Posted by jinnie1704 First of all, the deviance and doing wrong of any child cannot be shifted to the mother. Although mothers are traditionally believed to be responsible for taking care of the whole family, especially the children, bringing up children is the work of both mothers and fathers. Therefore, it is unreasonable to state that the crimes among young people are the result of mothers’ working outside the home ignoring the role of fathers as well as others family’s members. | First of all, the deviance and wrongdoing of any child cannot be blamed on the mother. Although mothers are traditionally believed to be responsible for taking care of the whole family, especially the children, bringing up children is the work of both mothers and fathers. Therefore, it is unreasonable to state that the crimes among young people are the result of mothers working outside the home, ignoring the role of fathers as well as that of other family members.
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