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Old 25-Mar-2007, 14:46
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Default Re: The book reads well.

I came across the following phrase, reads poorly, found in Sir Eric Geddes: Business and Government in War and Peace by Keith Grieves (1991), cited here.
"In a series that sets out to be "readable," this book reads poorly. Sentences bear an uneasy relationship with their fellows; characters, events, ..."
There's also a very interesting article called Middles and Movement here.

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