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Old 31-Mar-2007, 15:40
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Anyone can check the poem below if it has any mistake ?

The Heaven
What's that to me if the end of the world will come
If the way of the life will finish,i want it now
I have no fright,i am happy
I loved the love with you in my lifetime
The name of the lines on my face is you
You are the reason of my every breath
If i come to the world again my darling,
I look for you,i love you again
I don't change the heaven instead of your hairwire
I love you as long as i live
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