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Old 08-Apr-2007, 13:15
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Default Re: Edit my paragraph please

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Secondly, Population control will improve the living standard of people. Usually, when the family is small, it will easy to control and support.
Secondly, population control would improve living standards. Usually, when a family is small it is relatively easy to manage and support.

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Both mother and father are free from take care children, so they can manage time to work and earn money to support the family.
I really don't understand that sentence.

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As a result, the living condition of family will improve to be better.

Say:
As a result, the living conditions of the family will improve.
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