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Re: Edit my paragraph please Quote:
Originally Posted by esophea Secondly, Population control will improve the living standard of people. Usually, when the family is small, it will easy to control and support. | Secondly, population control would improve living standards. Usually, when a family is small it is relatively easy to manage and support. Quote:
Originally Posted by esophea Both mother and father are free from take care children, so they can manage time to work and earn money to support the family. | I really don't understand that sentence. Quote:
Originally Posted by esophea As a result, the living condition of family will improve to be better. |
Say: As a result, the living conditions of the family will improve. ~R |