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Originally Posted by MichaelKamms  Hi,
Would like to know whether there is any issue with the letter below:
"As part our efforts of improving support experience to our value customers, we would like to introduce a better support procedure for providing more consistent support coverage."
Or whether there is any way to improve it.
Thanks for your help |
An awful lot of support here.
As part of our effort to improve support for our valued customers, we [would like to/intend to/aim to] introduce better procedures. These will ensure that we can consistently provide a broad range of solutions to problems.