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Originally Posted by RonBee  Population growth is the biggest problem in the world today. If the population continues to increase as fast as it has been, the world will eventually not have enough space for everybody. Because the world’s resources are limited, some organizations are trying to find strategies to reduce the population of the world. One of these strategies is population control, which can reduce population growth. Research shows that seventy percent of the world population lives in Third World countries. I strongly agree with one statement that said that population control should be a priority for Third world countries. Population control brings lots of benefits to Third World countries. |
population control 2 - "is the introduction of birth control, which can help reduce population growth" ("population control", as you wrote, is too broad an approach to refer to as strategy. Give real-life examples instead.)
to reduce the population of the world - sounds too ambitious and even far-fetched; "to limit population increase" sounds more realistic
population control in last sentence - irritating repetition. "This could entail a great many benefits to TW countries".