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Old 18-Jun-2007, 22:30
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Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
A big topic to choose. Your title is "The beginning of our Church" - who is "our" and which "Church" do you mean? Or do you mean "The beginning of Christianity"?

You are quoting too much and paraphrasing the original texts, rather than using your own words to describe and discuss the events.
We are accustomed to use "Church" though we refer to the whole Christianity, referring to the Church that Jesus Christ built, Not the churches that just emerged centuries after the real one. Perhaps for "our" I should be changing that to "the", would that be ok?

I just made this one in a rush that I haven't got a choice but to quote and paraphrase... I'll try to revise this and in my own words, thanks!!!
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