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Originally Posted by kltakky Dear all,
please help me to check this sentence for correctness.
"Specifications of all the necessary testing activities to be performed and deliverables as a consequence of the testing efforts are presented in this section"
THANK UU SO M UCH!! |
I find the sentence very confusing. I think it would read better in the active voice: This section contains....
I would say "specifications
for all ....
I don't like the word "deliverables" or the phrase "as a consequence".
I'm not sure how a section can contain something that results from testing. Are you talking about forms, charts, etc.?