[RonBee]

Originally Posted by S.H.E*

It is no denying that the primary reason for University¡¯s existence is helping students become more socially adaptable and suit for the feature career. But in my opinion, the function of college is not only for better job.

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• There is no denying that the primary reason for the existence of the university is to help students become more socially adaptable and better suited for their future careers. But in my opinion the function of college is not only to help people get better jobs.

Originally Posted by S.H.E*

The justification for a university also imports students¡¯ knowledge and skills, which is essential to their high study such as master or doctor.

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• The function of a university is to impart knowledge and to help people acquire skills.

What do you think?

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