Please edit the following sentences :

1. They also introduced me to your former prime minister and a few other cabinet ministers from the various ministeries and they well all extremely supportive of this entrepreneurship.

2. By travelling and competing , you can learn how to socialise and mix with people.

3. A lot basically boils down to how serious you want to achieve something.
4. Learning to focus also comes with a bit of discipline as well.

5. There is a sport robotics workshop or there is a robotics workshop ?
( which one is correct )

6. When you are playing in a tournament or when you are playing for a tournament. Which sentence is correct ?

7. Based on your experiences, what can you tell youngsters who have hopes and ambitions in sports and studies and who want to do as well as you ?

8. Everyone played a role in helping me to reach where I am today or Everyone has played a role in helping me to reach to what I am today.