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Default Re: send mail to ask cover letter (pls check my grammar & wording)

It's not too short, but:
1) Are you really going to review his resume before he send the cover letter?
2) Do you know him well enough to say "Dear John" instead of "Dear Mr. Smith"?
3) ... interest in the Penetration Tester position.
4) Don't use "Kindly please." One or the other. Please send...
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